Comments on: A Short Story http://umbralite.com/2008/12/a-short-story/ Not vigilantes. Just grumpy. Sun, 15 Jan 2012 19:29:50 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Nathan http://umbralite.com/2008/12/a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-74 Nathan Wed, 17 Dec 2008 04:40:00 +0000 http://umbralite.com/?p=54#comment-74 <a HREF="http://www.albinokraken.com/2008/12/methuselah-oddbin/" REL="nofollow">Told you.</a> Told you.

]]> By: Nathan http://umbralite.com/2008/12/a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-73 Nathan Mon, 15 Dec 2008 06:59:00 +0000 http://umbralite.com/?p=54#comment-73 Very nice job.<br/><br/>I must warn you, however, that fan art is imminent. Very nice job.

I must warn you, however, that fan art is imminent.

]]> By: idreamwing http://umbralite.com/2008/12/a-short-story/comment-page-1/#comment-72 idreamwing Wed, 10 Dec 2008 01:53:00 +0000 http://umbralite.com/?p=54#comment-72 "Proper church behavior be temporarily purgified!"<br/>...that line makes me smile every time I hear/read it. Because, apparently, it IS impossible to damn it...<br/>Upon reading, it appears as though you have some grammatical complexities. You can use more periods instead of commas when you finish thoughts. <br/>But that is merely a suggestion. *shrug* S'good. I hope you do well on it. The ending is still excellent. *grin* “Proper church behavior be temporarily purgified!”
…that line makes me smile every time I hear/read it. Because, apparently, it IS impossible to damn it…
Upon reading, it appears as though you have some grammatical complexities. You can use more periods instead of commas when you finish thoughts.
But that is merely a suggestion. *shrug* S’good. I hope you do well on it. The ending is still excellent. *grin*

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